The psychic combat gameplay was awesome, as was the dialogue. However, I wish there was a lewd ending for succeeding, too. Maybe it should require succeeding at high lust? Actually, I would recommend different endings for different ending stat states. This little game could support a lot of different endings, and because of that, I GREATLY hope you'll continue working on it after the jam.
Issues with Lizard Game:There’s a missing comma or period on the Influencer dialogue near the start that suggests maladaptive daydreaming. Specifically, it says “There’s the thrumming of the generator, the beeping of computer terminals” and that sentence looks to be missing something at the end.
While loading the downstairs area while using Firefox, the game hung and took a long time to load, and then was slow to close the description for looking at the neon sign. This did not happen when loading the downstairs area while using Chrome. I repeated this bug. Both parts reproduced - the slow load of the entry and the slow close of the sign’s description.
The downstairs area also hung briefly halfway across the room. This downstairs stuff recurred when loading a save from later in the game. Basically, reloading the page and then going downstairs for the first time in a setting caused a huge slowdown.
The onpxfgbel erirny sequence has two errors. First off, ‘that remained shut’ should be ‘that had remained shut’. More irksome, It says ‘if one the guardians’ when it should clearly say ‘if one of the guardians’. This was the error which I noticed several playthroughs ago, which inspired me to leave this comment pointing out issues.
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In other news, that was playthrough four. I can't quite come up with a fanfic plot, and I don't quite have the right kinks...
I love your games! I was recommended to play this one, and I went on to play Reset Day and Unspecified Behavior, too. I think Reset Day is my actual favorite. I've tried (unsuccessfully, I think) to recommend it to people. Still, Werewolf Detective was the game good enough to convince me to look at the others. I'm looking forward to more drones most of all, but if you do come back to werewolves I'll play that, too!
I loved this game! My spouse encouraged me to comment with possible errors that I noticed while playing, so here's this post, which wouldn't otherwise have existed.
“Anyways, I really did just wanted to check in.” This should be “want”, not “wanted”.
It’s possible to look at the entrance to Gail’s office, but there isn’t a description there.
My skill tree didn’t highlight the Edge skill after I attained it.
My spouse is also the one who told me to play this, after encouraging me to pivot one of my characters in a book I'm writing into being a private detective. She (the character) is considering a change of career while being located to potentially get involved in intrigues. The discussion of what careers she might seek was the topic. We ended up discussing what someone might do with their lives if they're torn between seeking safety and taking risks. Detective work came up in that context.
I may have to play this game a bunch to see if I can write my first detective character.
EDIT: Also, I found a typo on my second playthrough. "(...follwed by a sudden electric jolt that flows up your arm and over your face." The follwed is in the text!
And another one! Maybe this is character speech, but it surprised me out of Gail. "And if they is ignorant of Guild politics, and commits a faux pas..." Should Gail say "if they is"? I think this should be an "if they are".
And another one! There is a "they is" out of Charity as well. Unfortunately, when I went to edit the comment this time, it disrupted my exact location in the game, I think by triggering the page to reload... Oh, my autosave works. Good. "(Despite their protestation, they is clearly enjoying the attention - rolling on their back, legs twitching."
